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She took it as the rebuke it was, and found herself blushing. Even her mother Navani could not do that to her.
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She took it as the rebuke it was, and found herself blushing. Even her mother, Navani, could not do that to her.
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?Toward victory and, at long last, vengeance.?
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?On victory and, at long last, vengeance.?
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We start with some of the lesser Shardbearers and work up.?
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We start with some of the lesser Shardbearers and work up to him.?
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Father carried Shallan over the body of a woman in white. Little blood there.
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Father carried Shallan over the body of a woman in blue and gold. Little blood there.
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The other spheres were still there, but the the sleeve was unbuttoned.
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The other spheres were still there, but the sleeve was unbuttoned.
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If she knew that, it might tell her how her own princedom was fairing.
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If she knew that, it might tell her how her own princedom was faring.
Hardcover: PAGE 397
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I SUPPOSE THIS MUST BE, the Stormfather said.
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I SUPPOSE THIS MUST BE, the Rider of Storms said.
Hardcover: PAGE 397
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I CANNOT STOP THIS, the Stormfather said. I WOULD
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I CANNOT STOP THIS, the Rider of Storms said. I WOULD
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The terms were for an exchange of goods, Father trading some of his breechtree cotton and raw shum to Revilar in exchange for a small payment
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The terms were for an exchange of goods, Father trading some of his breachtree cotton and raw shum to Revilar in exchange for a small payment
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Even walking on her tiptoes?which was masked by the illusion?she was much shorter than the highprince.
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Even walking on her tiptoes?which was masked by the illusion?she was much shorter than the highlord.
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Blasted spren, Kaladin thought, walking up bedside Shallan and Adolin.
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Blasted spren, Kaladin thought, walking up beside Shallan and Adolin
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Gawk slunk around the corner.
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Gawx slunk around the corner.
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?And then the storm would come,? Dalinar replied softly. Twelve days.
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?And then the storm would come,? Dalinar replied softly. Eleven days.
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After no attack had come that night, Dalinar had pushed the three armies into another day of marching.
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After no attack had come that night, Dalinar had pushed the four armies into another day of marching.
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Had they recovered Teleb?s Shards?
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Had they recovered Teleb?s Plate and the King?s Blade he was wielding?
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General Khal?s som wore his own Plate and bore Teleb?s Blade, which he?d blessedly recovered from the corpse after the other man had fallen.
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General Khal?s son wore his own Plate and bore the King?s Blade that he?d blessedly recovered from Teleb?s corpse after the other man had fallen.
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Two storms coming, one from each direction. They will crash into each other right here.?
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Two storms coming, one from each direction. They will crash into one another right here.?
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?They will feed each other,? Pattern said.
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?They will feed one another,? Pattern said.
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Szeth did not parry. He just closed his eyes.
Kaladin drove his Blade into the assassin?s chest right below the neck, severing the spine. Smoke burned out from beneath his eyelids, and his Blade slipped from his fingers. It did not vanish.
Get that! Syl sent him, a mental shout. Grab it, Kaladin. Don?t lose it!
Kaladin dove after the Blade, dropping Szeth?s corpse, letting it fall backward into the stormwall. It vanished among the wind, the rain, and the lightning, trailing faint wisps of Stormlight.
Kaladin grabbed the Blade just before the storm consumed it. Then he Lashed himself back upward, passing along the stormwall, the windspren he?d attracted spiraling about him and laughing with pure joy. As he crested the top of the storm, they burst around him and zipped away, moving off to dance in front of the still-advancing storm.
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Szeth did not parry. He just closed his eyes to accept the attack.
In that instant, for reasons he could not have articulated?pity, perhaps?? Kaladin diverted his blow, driving the Blade through Szeth?s wrist. The skin greyed. Flashing with reflected lightning, the sword tumbled from the assassin?s fingers, then dulled as it plummeted.
The glow fled the assassin?s form. All his Stormlight vanished in a puff, all Lashings banished.
Szeth started to fall.
Get that sword! Syl sent to Kaladin, a mental shout. Grab it.
?The assassin!?
He has released the bond. He?s nothing without that sword! It must not be lost! Kaladin dove after the Blade, passing Szeth, who tumbled through the air like a rag doll, buffeted by winds toward the stormwall.
Kaladin furiously Lashed himself downward, snatching the Blade just before the storm consumed it. Nearby, the assassin dropped past him into the storm and was swallowed up, leaving Kaladin with the haunting image of Szeth?s limp silhouette being driven into a plateau below with all the tempest?s force.
Raising the assassin?s Blade, Kaladin Lashed himself back upward, passing along the stormwall, the windspren he?d attracted spiraling about him and laughing with pure joy. As he crested the top of the storm, they burst around him and zipped away, moving off to dance in front of the stilladvancing storm.
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?That was very nicely done,? she said. ?Perhaps I?ll keep you around this time.?
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?I didn?t kill him,? Kaladin said.
?Did you want to??
?No,? Kaladin said, surprised that it was the truth. ?But I should have anyway.?
?You have his Blade,? she replied. ?The Stormfather likely took him. And if not ? well, he is no longer the weapon he once was. I must say, that was very nicely done. Perhaps I?ll keep you around this time.?
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?This is going to happen again?? Kaladin said. ?That other storm is still out there??
?Yes,? Syl said, sitting on his shoulder. ?A new storm. It?s not of us, but of him.?
?Will it be this bad every time it passes?? Kaladin asked, surveying the wreckage. Of the plateaus he could see, only the one had been destroyed completely. But if the storm could do that to pure rock, what would it do to a city? Particularly since it blew the wrong way.
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He found no sign of Szeth?s corpse. That could mean the man had survived somehow, or it could just mean the storm had buried the body in rubble or blown it away, leaving it in some forgotten chasm to rot until the bones were finally picked over by an unfortunate salvage crew.
For now, the fact that Szeth had not summoned his Blade back to him was enough. Either he was dead, or?as Syl had said?the strange weapon was no longer bound to him. Kaladin didn?t know how to tell. This Shardblade had no gemstone at the pommel to indicate.
Kaladin stopped at a high point of the plateau and surveyed the wreckage. Then he glanced toward Syl, who sat on his shoulder. ?This is going to happen again?? he said. ?That other storm is still out there??
?Yes,? Syl said, ?A new storm. It?s not of us, but of him.?
?Will it be this bad every time it passes?? Of the plateaus he could see, only the one had been destroyed completely. But if the storm could do that to pure rock, what would it do to a city? Particularly since it blew the wrong way.
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?He is dead, then?? Teft asked.
?Yes.?
?You slew the Assassin in White,? Bisig breathed.
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?He is dead, then?? Teft asked.
?Near enough.?
?You defeated the Assassin in White,? Bisig breathed.
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Adolin had left a Stormlight lantern for her that was extravagant, considering how few lit gemstones they had?and it showed a small square chamber with a stone bench in the corner.
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Adolin had left a Stormlight lantern for her?that was extravagant, considering how few lit gemstones they had?and it showed a small square chamber with a stone bench in the corner.
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?Why am I not dead?? he whispered. ?The Shardblade pierced me. I fell. Why didn?t I die??
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?Why am I not dead?? he whispered. ?I released my bond to the Shardblade. I fell into the storm without Lashings. Why didn?t I die??
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?Like a drowned man restored to life with the proper ministrations, you could be restored with the right fabrial. If I had waited seconds longer, of course, it would have been too late.?
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?Like a drowned man restored to life with the proper ministrations, you could be restored with the right Surgebinding. If I had waited seconds longer, of course, it would have been too late.?
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Still kneeling, Szeth looked up after the man. ?My people have the other Honorblades, and have kept them safe for millennia.
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Still kneeling, Szeth looked up after the man. ?You are right. My people have the other Honorblades, and have kept them safe for millennia.
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?I have brought a Shardblade for you.
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?I have brought a replacement Shardblade for you.
