Mock was written as a total buffoon. It was not believable that he could maintain command over the island, the other captains, or even just one boat with how stupid and naive he was. The Napan/Cawn trap had red flags written all over it and the idiot just sails right into it. He made Tattersail's scenes much less enjoyable by just being there.
Other random musings:
- I'm a bit embarrassed that I don't put 2+2 together and figure out who "Jack" was until 75% of the way through the book.
- Tocaras is Toc the Elder, right? The name's too similar to ignore, but they don't actually describe the guy, so I don't know if he's Napan.
- Kallor was filler. He could have been cut from the book as his scenes provided no development of the character nor his fued with Nightchill.
- Was there any significance to Lee changing her name to Opal? Searched the malazan wiki and that's the name of a Crimson Guard mage.
- Really wanted to see Urko choke a bitch.
- Were the Napans lieing about Hawl being dead? Or is this Hawl a different from the Hawl that is Nok's wife?