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Mr. Poopybutthole
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Started reading this one.
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I like the premise a lot but parts of it really pull me out of it. This is a 19 year old cadet sent on a mission to gather intelligence by attending wizard school. This person would not have the slightest inkling about high level secret squirrel magitek beyond using it as required for the mission. But she instantly knows exactly how egghead super scientists on Earth have reverse engineered a magical artifact that she also knows nothing about.
I hate that kind of lazy writing. But the rest of it is enjoyable if you can ignore the Mary Sue moments.
Wearing Power Armor to a Magic School | Royal Road
In the year 3027 humanity makes a breakthrough, the first interdimensional portal to another world is opened, and a candidate is sent through. He died immediately upon arrival. It is now the year 3047, and humanity prepares to send a second candidate, this time equipped with the tools and...
www.royalroad.com
I like the premise a lot but parts of it really pull me out of it. This is a 19 year old cadet sent on a mission to gather intelligence by attending wizard school. This person would not have the slightest inkling about high level secret squirrel magitek beyond using it as required for the mission. But she instantly knows exactly how egghead super scientists on Earth have reverse engineered a magical artifact that she also knows nothing about.
I hate that kind of lazy writing. But the rest of it is enjoyable if you can ignore the Mary Sue moments.
