First part is an observation. Second is a rhetorical statement, like, hmm a shrink? Such bad writing1111
Great points, really, but let's go back to what your friend Homsar said about me:
ever since the premier happened you bitch about anything in the show. You have and issue with the way Farrell brought up the guy is seeing a shrink.....no one else had a issue or gave a shit about that but you bitched about it. If the show was doing anything that you are takling about it would be awful
Turns out that wasn't even something I said. But, I guess now that Homsar believes it's important enough to warrant a discussion, let's look at that scene. They were just at his house, found his appointment book, Velcro is looking through his appointment book, for appointments and things, and says:
"psychiatrist appointments. He was seeing a shrink."
Now, great, the first part is an observation, but I'm not going to say the second part sounded like a "rhetorical statement, like, hmm a shrink?" because when people ask a question, or are surprised by something or having any reaction at all, they usually show that in their inflection or actions or tonal changes. Voice maybe rises: he was seeing a shrink? Or it's a serious development so a voice may become more measured, maybe the character turns to the other to reinforce the point with a serious tone "he was seeing a shrink." Or it's a break in the case, so there's a slight bit of intrigue or excitement when it's said, like, hey, this is interesting here, he was seeing a shrink!
Instead, what we get is Coolin delivering both lines one after another with the exact same tone and inflection. In fact, in what I would call shitty direction and/or editing, the shot is on him staring at the book the whole time those lines are delivered. So, what we get is she knows he's looking at an appointment book, he's looking at the appointment book, with appointments, and in a pretty monotone matter-of-fact way Velcro observes there are psychiatrist appointments, then further observes that means he was seeing a shrink.
In all, it's a stupid little thing that doesn't matter in the grand scheme of the show, but is one illustration of what has continually been direction that left something to be desired, in conjunction with clumsy lines of dialog that definitely could have been tightened up in editing, on top of being delivered in an uninteresting, monotone sort of way.
Here's the scene.
In the car after visiting the weird/disturbing scene of a crime and torture, where they found the suspects appointment book.
Velcro is tapping his fingers. McAnal is fidgeting with an e-cigarette
McAnal: Do you mind?
Velcro stops tapping his fingers. Continues to analyze the appointment book.
Velcro: Psychiatrist appointments. He was seeing a shrink.
McAnal: We need to call every appointment in that calendar. Should check all the circled dates against his GPS.
Velcro: Yea.
McAnal takes a hit from an e-cig.
Velcro: You pull off that e-cig. Not a lot of people do.
McAnal: This place gets a day to day influx of nearly 70,00 people, right? Where do they live?
Velcro,nearly interrupting her: I tried one once. It felt like it was smoking me. A real cigarette wouldn't make you feel like that.... maybe it was just a little bit too close to, uh, sucking a robot's dick. I don't know.
McAnal sighs and looks out the window, and stops fidgeting with her e-cigarette.
Now, they just came from a crime scene that was bizarre and where someone was tortured, but they don't talk about that. Velcro astutely points out there are appointments in the appointment book, psychiatry appointments, which means he was seeing a shrink! McAdams responds with some pretty basic notion of following up on the appointments int he appointment book, which is surely why they took it as evidence. Velcro quips about e-cigs with all the philosophical gusto of pointing out there is lettuce in a house salad, while McAnal ignores him and reflects on the nature of the city, and the scene ends....
To me, it sure feels like there were redundant lines, obvious lines, shit that could have been cut out, things that could have elicited some sort of reaction between the two other than quiet disinterest or police small talk, and could have been acted in a way that didn't make it seem like they were bored with their own existences. To me, all that scene was doing was establishing there is a phsyciatrist to follow up with, which could have been established in a different scene, like at the scene of the crime, which seems far more relevant and exciting than them sitting in a car bored and boring.
But, yeah, hey I wasn't even the one to bring those lines or that scene up in the first place despite the assertion. It makes me wonder, though, if you guys can't even follow this thread, can't even engage semi-intelligently with the points being made here and instead just keep accusing others of making criticisms they didn't, and can't seem to present a coherent argument other than shit like 'huurrrr' and '111111' and can't do it with any intermediate grasp of the English language, then why should anyone else believe you're really paying attention to the nuances of a television show or even begin to understand why you may like or dislike something?
Does telling me to fuck off and stop watching give you more understanding of the show? And if you don't care to understand it, and just want to enjoy it, then why engage in people discussing it? Just enjoy it and ignore all the so-called idiots who have criticisms.
I mean, there are plenty of things I enjoy without fully understanding them, like flight and Taco Bell. Sometimes it's okay to admit things are over your head, or just not passionate about something to want to learn the finer nuances of it. For those times I've personally found it best to simply keep my mouth shut and eat my Taco Bell or stare out the window of an aircraft in wonderment not needing to know anything more than that I am enjoying it, to enjoy it.
Also, we all know you just have a hard on for me, Homsar. It's not like you're arguing or attacking everyone who has said things in the show were stupid, otherwise you'd be attacking this dumb fuck too:
Did seem kind of stupid of Velcoro not to clear the house first. Dont know why this guy wargs into a hawk if he planned on killing Farrell